Could children teach adults? I saw an interesting video in TED. A young girl named Adora Svitak spoke about why children have lots of things to teach adults and why children are better than adults. She said that children don't think about limits, and she talked about bad things that happened because of adults, such as the World War 2 .Some children did great things, such as Anne Frank. She said 'You must lend an ear today, because we will be the leader tomorrow'. She also said that children should be able to be better adults than the adults now. I agree with her thoughts that children are the leaders of the next generation.
First, children don't know any limits. We all once dreamed of stuff that is impossible when we were young. When I was young(well I'm still young but like when I was in kindergarten) I dreamed of being a Power Ranger when I grew up. There's no limitation to a child's imagination. That's why children have unlimited possibilities.
Secondly, there are lots of children who made a change to the world so adults are not the only people who could change the world. Anne Frank touched everyone's heart just with her diary.She was only a child. On the other hand, there are lots of problems that adults have caused.
This is why I think children are the leaders of the next generation and that adults have something to learn from children. Finishing this post I would like to repeat this phrase one more time. ' You must lend an ear today, because we will be the leader tomorrow.'
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12 years ago
Your introduction is a little unfocused. It is really just a list of things Adora Svitak said.
ReplyDeleteYour first body paragraph has an interesting example from your own life. Your second body paragraph doesn't show anything new or explain anything.